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Verdwald
Average Member
USA
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 Posted - 09/27/2004 : 11:19:13 PM
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And it's Hilfiger Heaven in the steamy night
And a feathered bird on a heavenly flight
It's just too cool when the hot girls dance
And you can feel the sex in Tommy's pants
And the thunder rolls and the wild wind blows
Where the cabin stands near the pine grove
Yellow light in their shiney face
And the heart of love and the dance of grace
And the fire of love burns hot and free
And through the eyes of love we fail to see
the naked freedom 'round our door
and the cursed demons making war
Part of Hilfiger Heaven by Bill Bourne
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Billy T
New Member
USA
64 Posts |
Posted - 09/28/2004 : 12:39:58 AM
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Anatomy Anatomy Anatomy.......pay attention to figures......your concept is good.....draw random people that you see.......look at anatomy books.....and variety is key.......in a woodland scene the trees would be sparatic.....
good start though...
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MAXX
Average Member
Germany
651 Posts |
Posted - 09/28/2004 : 09:43:59 AM
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Wow. What pencilwork. Nice. What size is that picture, doesn't look very big?
Billy T is somewhere right... but i think you manage that sooner or later.
Some of the trees, especially the two on the left look somehow flat, as if the are drawn on paper and put in place on a stage... you get what i try to tell you?
Nice work. And i think the strange anatomy adds to the atmosphere.
You know, first thing i thought was that it reminds me of the neverending story, the picture on the book (at least the german version, don't know what the us version looks like)
I like it very much!
MAXX
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Verdwald
Average Member
USA
908 Posts |
Posted - 09/28/2004 : 2:26:32 PM
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BillyT -
Thanks Billy. What part of my anatomy is wrong? I can't see it as this one is still hot off the press, you know. That's wierd, that it takes someone else to see the faults.
Maxx
The original size is 9 by 6. I scaled it down in photoshop to fit it here.
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Billy T
New Member
USA
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Posted - 09/28/2004 : 7:04:09 PM
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note that i am not ripping on you...i sometimes do a piece and i stare at it for so long that i have to have my roommate look at it to tell me what is wrong...another tool that i use is my computer......i scan something in and look at it while i am drawing...for some reason it puts it in a whole new perspevtive for me.....
i have scanner now...so if anyone can tell me how to post....ill put something up for a ............pummeling...urrgh...critique....
thanks...billthompson
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MAXX
Average Member
Germany
651 Posts |
Posted - 09/28/2004 : 7:59:11 PM
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At last. But i guess you don't have any webspace, right?
Get some. Upload your scanned pics and insert the url between these two tags:
[ i m g ] [ / i m g ]
(note that you have to write them without space, i had to put spaces between the letters so you can see it otherwise there would be an icon, a whit square with a red x in it)
Either you write them yourself or you use the little button in the tasklist above, klick on this button: 
Then the image should appear as you can see it above in this thread. If you like to just link it, that it will be opened in a new window use this button:
Hope that helps.
MAXX
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Namra
Junior Member
Malaysia
149 Posts |
Posted - 10/26/2004 : 08:57:52 AM
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theres a tip i've read somewhere of whenever you've finished the drawing, look at it upside down and you can see clearly should there be anything wrong with it. it have something to do with the right brain vs left brain thingy.
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Verdwald
Average Member
USA
908 Posts |
Posted - 10/26/2004 : 1:07:24 PM
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I understand all that, but nobody has told me exactly what is wrong with it. That's what I asked in the start of this topic. Either they don't know and are just saying it's off or just haven't replied yet.
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MAXX
Average Member
Germany
651 Posts |
Posted - 10/26/2004 : 3:53:56 PM
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What do you want?
I don't think there is something wrong with it? It is a nice skuril illustration.
I think of it as a wonderfull fantasy illustration. It reminds me of the neverending story, i doubt that you know the german cover for the audio play or the book.
If you want me to say something about the persons, the anatomie is i am afraid to tell you, not exactly the way those frelling supermodels look like.
It is a major problem, as i said in another thread that many of the people here or on other board don't say anything, they register, but they never say a damn thing.
If my opinion count anything at all...
I LIKE IT A LOT!!!!!!
MAXX
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Moonlight Dancers
