Top: Very good use of black and shadows on this 3rd 'Horror" assignment, Tim. Keep working on your figures, anatomy, and proportions. You're doing well and you're improving steadily.

Panel 1: Fog would add to the effect of eeriness

Panel 2: Armored figure should be larger.

Bars should be light colored-- in contrast to shadows in background

figure should be centered

Panel 3: Light hits this wall

texture on stone

Worried expression on girl's face.

Light source.

Light

Panel 4: Scared, worried expression

Panel 5: Shoulder

Expression of fear: more eyes and raised eyebrows

Larger hand and arm in comparison to head.

Monster should be reaching for victim with both hands.

Good effort here, Tim. Good sense of Horror.