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Example Nineteen | |
| Student Bob Smeets is moving forward in his Second "Story Graphics" course assignment. | ||
[ Click thumbnails to enlarge assignment images ] (Please note that all critiques are done on TRACING PAPER OVER the student's original drawings.) |
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Assignment |
Assignment, Critiqued |
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Critique Comments: Top: Very Good 2nd Stroy-Graphics assignment, Bob. Done with sensitivity and good attention to details. It must be remembered, however, that size of illustration has a great deal to do with effect. Panel 1: Watch drape and folds of clothes. Watch construction of face. Folds from top of head Panel 2: Good Map! Panel 3: Extend top panel thru this space. Good panels here Bob- but would've been more effective if panels were larger. Panel 4: Smaller figures to give more sense of size of room. Show full figures here Closer on this face. Panel 5: Angle perspective for dramatic effect. Bob- Your individual illustrations would be a lot more effective
if they wre larger. Don't work quite so small. You're doing well-
Keep it up! |
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