Top: Very Nice 3rd inking assignment, Richard: Try to be more selective as to application of heavy ink lines. Proper combination of thick and thin will add to the dimensional effect of your drawings.

Thinner lines allow for more variation of texture

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Pen

Shoulders too low

Good face

Combination of thick and thin lines

Hair texture

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Richard: a more careful, realistic texture rendering here would give more credibility to the character and act as a good balance to these figures

Richard: your work continues to show good potential