Critique Comments:
"TOP:
Very nice 1st 'heroes' assignment, Nemiah. Keep working on
your figures and anatomy. Work on backgrounds.
Doing a super hero comic book story is much more than a matter of
drawing figures only. Backgrounds are critically important.
Where is the story or action taking place? Where is all this happening?
NOTES:
Fig1
-Center of body
-Rig cage is wider
-Inside of elbow
-Torso is too long
-Too many muscles on legs
-Hand too small
-Anatomy and musculature on legs are incorrect.
-Knees too low
-Legs too long
Fig2
-More chin
-Shoulder too low
-Arm too long
-Torso too long
-Leg is distorted
-Leg too long and distorted.
P1
-Longer angle to show more of background in scene.
* Usephotographic reference.
P2
-Show thief with money and gun in foreground
-Hero breaks through ceiling
P3
-Show background
-Money and gun go flying
-Nemiah-work from photographic
reference - don't make it up or try to draw from memory. Realistic
backgrounds are very important - otherwise the pictures don't look
right. You're doing well - keep it up!
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