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Very nice 3rd 'heroes' assignment, Kevin. Your work continues to improve! Keep at it.
Shoulders and arms a little over exaggerated.


NOTES:
-Good figures
-Eyes a little too low
-Center of head
In this position, the figures right arm and shoulder would be forward
-Feet too big
-Legs too big
-Torso too long
-Hands too large
-Arms too long
-Pyramid would be larger
-Crowd watching
-Smaller figure in background
-Lower sacrifice
-Watch anatomy on back of arm
-Action should be more centered in panel
-Kevin - plan your panel compositions a little more carefully. Focus in on the most important story elements and design your panels accordingly. You're doing well - keep it up.