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Example Thirteen |
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Student Ethan Colchamiro is moving forward in his fourth "Inking"
course assignment. |
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(Please note that all critiques are done on TRACING PAPER OVER the
student's original drawings.) |
Assignment
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Assignment, Critiqued
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Critique Comments:
"TOP:
Very nice, clean ink line on the 4th inking assignment,
Ethan. Work on textures,
like stone, wood, metal, water,
etc.,etc.
NOTES:
-Good character here
-Watch proportions on figure
-Rolled up sleeves should be consistent on forearms of upper
arms?
-Shoulders?
-No indentation here.
-Right shoulder forward when right leg is back
-Running figure
-Wouldn't 'corporate man' have shiny black shoes?
* Ethan- inking cannot take the place of good drawing.
-Backgrounds are critically important
-Don't use dry brush
-Office backgrounds
-'comported man' should be in the picture
Ethan- your inking is coming along well-but,
keep on working on your drawing. Your work continues to show
good potential. Keep it up!
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