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Your last 'Villains' assignment worked out well, John. Keep practicing textures (stone, clothing, etc.).

NOTES:
Silhouette of figure should connect with shadows.
Miner in another positions-not the same in all 3 panels
Hole
Show rocks taken out.
Good close up here John - but maybe' this panel should've shown the miner finding the 'gold', picking it up. And a shadowy figure behind.
This illustration should be more in center of the panel.
Dropping stone
Miner's eyes should be looking over to a side.
Good creature
Creature holding miner's arm should be more prominent, not hidden down below.
Blacks and shadows are important in horror.
Hat falling off.
John- your work continues to show very good potential. Plan your compositions a little more carefully - work on textures - and keep it up!