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Example Ten
Dwight Bey's third "Penciling" assignment is showing good progress.

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(Please note that all critiques are done on TRACING PAPER OVER the student's original drawings.)


Assignment
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Assignment, Critiqued
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Critique Comments:

"TOP:
Good third assignment, Dwight. Keep up the effort and keep practicing!

LEFT:
   - Your drawings are coming along well, Dwight. Watch your figure drawing. Practice putting them into movement and action. You have a tendency to draw the figure too short. Try to get greater depth and space between objects by placing large objects in foreground. Keep up the good work!

   - good reference on this monkey.
   - left arm forward, right leg back
   - When right arm is back, right leg is forward.
     If not, the figure will look "clunky" and out of balance.
   - Large limbs in foreground, heavily shadowed, creates more, space and distance
   - good reference here

RIGHT:
   - watch perspective
   - watch shadow side of buildings for consistency
   - figure should be a little taller with extended right arm


The blue washes of color are suggestions for black areas and shadows."


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