"TOP:
Very nice layouts on this assignment, Sandy. Your work continues to show a lot of potential!

CLOCKWISE:
   Good motion with hair
   Watch arm and shoulders
   Separate legs for more sense of motion
   Torso is too long

BOTTOM:
   This head is rather gratuitous-- should be doing something to show involvement-- or left out.
   Perhaps like this

RIGHT:

CLOCKWISE:
   Good perspective and sense of distance
   Good spotting of black here
   More of a "spidery" effect with this leg.
   Very good layout/pencils here, Sandy.


   You're doing real well, Sandy. Your pencils are clean and clear-- and your disposition of blacks and shadows are well planned.
   Try practicing inking over your pencils. But use a sheet of vellum placed over your pencils--
so you can retain your pencils. The vellum is transparent/translucent material.
   Continue with your assignments-- we look forward to seeing your work.
   Keep it up!!

   Inking your own material will give you a better insight for your penciling."