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Good characters and unique* style, Eric. Keep up the good work
   *your style is very marketable.

CHARACTER SHEET:
   RIGHT TO LEFT:
   Cuter effect with an up-turned nose
   That's excellent!
   Watch exaggeration
   Proportions are a little extreme here. Needs
more width in shoulder and chest.

PANELS:
   Very good transition and attention to details here, Eric.
You're really doing well!
   Dripping
   Family group should be coming out of window... onto roof
   Good effect with "drops"
   Water should be shown in foreground
   Show more of group to be rescued

   Your pencil work is nice and clean, and your "story-telling" is well thought out, Eric.
Your work shows a great deal of potential-- so, keep it up!
   Watch the exaggerations of the hero character.
   Check some art anatomy books (library or bookstore) to get
a good handle on proportions, so that when you exaggerate it's within
the realm of possibility. Watch your main focus of story-telling
per panel. Your graphics should dramatize and clarify story content.
   Again, keep up the good work!"