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There has been a steady improvement in your work, Gary. Keep on drawing and practicing!!

NOTES:
PANEL ONE:
   Good opening panel
   Clearer silhouette

PANEL TWO:
   Raised hand in threatening posture.
   Good shot. Nicely planned!
   Consistent shadow on wall turret

PANEL THREE:
   Knight in foreground

PANEL FOUR:
   Giant should be more threatening
   Knight more centered.


Gary-
   Practice inking on your pencils by placing tracing paper over your pencils and inking on it. It will help with your pencils, and give you a better insight on what's needed for the completed work on textures, like rocks, ground, metal, etc. Also, the skin on the giant. And... keep up the good work!!"